Did you feel it too?
Was i the only one between us...
lost, blinded, and filled with love?
I loved you like no one else...
I thought not just about you,
But US, and how we could get so much stronger if we stayed together
My eyes were closed to all other girls...
Yet you decided you would take a look,
You saw him..my replacement.
I tired to hold on,
You wanted a change,
And i let go.

The funny thing is,
i still love you...
Like i have all along!
I can still see your face in my minds eye when we first met,
As good now as ever!
I can see your smile,
I can hear your laugh,
I can look into your eyes.
But it all feels a dream,
A good dream!
That ended bad,
that dream has scarred me from ever dreaming again.

Give me your love again,
and i don’t know what i would do...
Everything in me would be the biggest yes,
Would it ever be right?
God knows!
I feel used and call me crazy,
But i don’t think we should have ended on that!
We had soo much more we could have done!
Our dream was just begening!
Life marches on,
Life continues!

I knew i would find the right girl one day,
and when i thought i was going to colapse from sadness,
This girl apeared,
A new girl!
An angel,
Someone who has saved my pain!
Saved my heart,
Saved my future,
She can have every part of me!
Yes, cautious i allways will be,
Perhaps though that broken heart of mine,
Will just be a fading memory!
I can now regious,
She is everything i have asked for!

Please tell me what you think! ; ) thanksss!

i like it its nice :]
good job

thanks! ; ) its def not my best, but i just had some ideas i wrote down, ha ha, thank you so much though!!! ; ) ; )

thanks! ; ) its def not my best, but i just had some ideas i wrote down, ha ha, thank you so much though!!! ; ) ; )

I love it.

Sounds familiar... congrats.

I thought you did a really good job on this. The beginning and middle were my favorites. Thanks for reminding me men have hearts.